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Dark Poetry #1

Your words mean plenty.

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-11-22 01:36 AM

Your words mean plenty.
Words of laughter
words of sorrow
words of love
words of hate.

Your spite
causes pain.
Your contempt
frightens me.
Your hate
burns me.

You scorned
when I faultered.
You threatened
when I misunderstood.
You condemned
when I appealed.

My heart closes
for your love now.
My trust ceases
for your friendship.
My laughter silences
for your smiling.

I close my eyes
and I picture you.....
......
......
just a dream.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-11-22 07:35 AM

WOW! I like...it speaks of what I'm feeling currently! I can defantly relate!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-22 03:44 PM

Words of any kind have power Dev.
The power to uplift,destroy and nuture...words must never be taken lightly.
Very Well Done Verse

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

3 posted 1999-11-22 03:59 PM

I'm liking this, Dev.
I'm liking this a lot, Dev.
No, really, I'm liking this whole thing, Dev.

The end is my nightmare. If it's good, it's always a dream.

DB

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-22 07:40 PM

Beautiful, deverone. Wow, I wish I could just close my eyes and find some of my pains and their sources a dream...wonderful poem.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-11-22 08:50 PM

I really liked this one too Deverone, sometimes although it hurts, it IS better to close the door..

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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