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Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-11-22 01:26 AM


My nights, so lonely
my days, so cold.

My head has NO ONE to lean on
my hands have NO ONE to hold
my ears have NO ONE to listen to
my voice has NO ONE to talk to
my lips have NO ONE to kiss
my eyes have NO ONE to look upon
my heart has NO ONE to cherrish
my dreams have NO ONE left in them.

There is NO ONE for me.


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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-11-22 07:39 AM


I'm sure there is some one dev... i loved this one...sometimes i think that there is no one for me too!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"


[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 11-22-1999).]

mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
2 posted 1999-11-22 10:57 AM


this world we live, so cruel and mean,
i'll lend you my shoulder on which you can lean.
read my words, for i you can hold,
hear my voice, i long to be told.
speak your peace and i will hear,
to comfort and hold you so sincere.
my lips i can't share, they belong to another,
they belong to my children's blessed mother.
look into my eyes, reflections you see,
hope of things to come, that will be.
your heart may seem empty, darkness may lurk,
fill your void with your passionate work.
we all are lonely at times it seems,
just close your eyes and live in your dreams.
there is always someone for all of us,
live your dreams, rely on your trust.
hopes this helps a little dev, i'm here if you ever want to talk. mo.

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-22 01:52 PM


Felt this way many times, D.

This is well written and meaningful.

DB

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-22 03:36 PM


Yes D...there is someone out there just for you....and they are feeling the very same way


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-11-22 07:32 PM


Someone is out there for you Deverone, I'm sure of it. I felt this way for many years, too. Good poem, the loneliness and isolation pours through.


Michael

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