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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-21 06:38 PM



I too can hate,
I hate what he did to me,
I hate another for letting go,
I hate wondering what will become of me.

I hate violence and anger,
I hate when people hurt,
Either physically or emotionally,
I hate when others are curt.

I hate the endless merry go round,
That is my daily life,
I hate the lonliness, the boredom,
I hate being in this strife.

I hate cruelty,
Be it for man or beast,
I hate so many bad things,
To say the least.

I hate the wounded soul,
Crying inside of me,
I hate the sobbing and worries,
It often shows to me.

But I live my life by a philosophy,
Not to dwell on this hatred,
It can only harm me in the end,
Even though I may feel sated.

I push the hate into the recesses of my mind,
And lock it there in it's own little room,
Which I hardly ever visit,
It's only darkness and gloom.

This is my sacred vow,
To not focus on the hate,
To focus on loving and happiness,
All of which I hope to create.

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-11-21 06:42 PM


Great philosphy! I hope i can follow in your foot steps! great poem!


starboards

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-21 07:41 PM


Glad you liked it, I kind of wrote it with you in mind

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-21 10:05 PM


I LOVE IT Warrior Princess...especially.....

I hate the endless merry-go-round
This is my daily life,
I hate the loneliness and boredom
I hate being in strife.


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-21 10:07 PM


Glad you liked it Jenny Lee

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-22 12:08 PM


just testing


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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
6 posted 1999-11-22 07:37 AM


Aww! How cute isis! I've never been writen about in any poems! Thanks, you've just made my day!!!

thanks!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

7 posted 1999-11-22 09:47 AM


Isis the power is in your words
My mind and soul sit in awe of your
poetic voice
Write on my friend

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
8 posted 1999-11-22 11:02 AM


Hate hurts us from the inside out,
I wish it not for you
In words and poems let it shout,
And in your creation true.

DB

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 1999-11-22 06:01 PM


So glad I made your day Starboards, that's kinda what I wanted to do. Everyone needs a little magic in their days.....




Walter, what a lovely compliment thanks so much!!
Thanks DB, I will always let it out, or shout in here my friend

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
10 posted 1999-11-23 01:48 AM


Great poem, Isis.


michael

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

11 posted 1999-11-23 10:18 AM


Hope some day you will be able to unlock the little room, clean it out and throw the key away.

Wonderful expression of pain and hope.

-RS

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
12 posted 1999-11-23 05:20 PM


Thanks Michael and FreeByrd

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL
13 posted 1999-11-23 05:25 PM


Isis,

You've added one more log to my fire
I'm buring now.....
keep'em it coming

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
14 posted 1999-11-23 05:31 PM


Why thankyou Eegood!! Glad you like

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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