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Mindless bliss |
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pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
So happy Acting all sappy Yes I am smiling I know my troubles are piling up But I dont care Nothing is fare The world keeps moving I leap with mindless joy I am a zombie So go ahead lie and hurt me I dont care anymore The proplems bore me My mind is gone My work is done Proplems are not worth the worry Mom,dad, and freinds am sorry Ive lost my mind along with all that worry. I am off to my room of padded walls Hold all my calls Im taking a perminint mental absense I love being ignorant Mindless happyness My true bliss So long good bye Im going to mentaly die Have a party at my funeral Say hey to the curnal I am happily dead All is said. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Liked this one. It's unique and that's why I like it so much. Also sounds a little like me in a way. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I have travelled this road too!! Liked this a lot!! Just watch the spelling  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I sometimes used to wish I was in a padded room so that I could be safe from myself ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I like this poem but i think alot of ur emotions were lost when u tried to rhyme...good job though! |
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