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Spyder New Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 9 |
Look into my eyes Feel my passions run deep Lay down with me My arms wrap around your body Lips touching ever so softly Do you feel my hunger Do you know what I'm about I slide between Feel the strength Worlds colliding Hold me tighter Make me a part of you As we become one |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very sensual Spyder...I can feel the passion with which this was written..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I agree with Pepper. And may I add almost lunar  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very sensual Spyder. I didn't see much Dark in it but definately very enjoyable. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
This poem truely reminds me of how my x-boyfriend used to act towards me, it's gonna make me cry, but great poem though! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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