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mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-20 05:50 PM

i look into your face,
and there's so much more to see.
more that just your beauty,
looking back at me.

your eyes tell the story,
of a journey that you took.
your beautiful brown eyes,
read just like a book.

a woeful journey,
of the soul.
looking for someone,
to have and to hold.

tears from your eyes,
brings to my face a frown.
they were never intended,
for your eyes of brown.

wipe away all the tears,
and you will clearly see.
all of the things,
that were always meant to be.

someday you'll find happiness,
your journey will be through.
just as you were there for me,
i'll be there for you.

me.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-20 05:55 PM

Mo...this is exquisite!! You are a true Romantic Poet

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 1999-11-21 07:25 PM

JennyLee Captured my feelings perfectly! Keep up the good work and writing

I LOVED IT!!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 11-21-1999).]

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

3 posted 1999-11-21 11:31 PM

i am glad that you like it that much, being a hoopless romantic, can sometimes be a curse and sometimes it can be a truely wonderful experience. mo.

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

4 posted 1999-11-21 11:40 PM

Beautiful. The world needs more Hopeless romantics.

Thaddeus
Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 78
MA

5 posted 1999-11-22 12:15 PM

Your words suggest the searching of both the the subject on a personal journey and the poet searching and grasping what is inside those brown eyes, very tender and reassuring. Kudos.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

6 posted 1999-11-22 05:50 PM

Another winner Mo!

DB

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