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Feel (repost from teen#1)
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Feel (repost from teen#1) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I can touch But I can't feel Not anything good anyway And all the turtles run from me Sometimes it feels Like the only feelings Worth feeling Are the ones I can't feel anymore The things I want Are things that I will never have I feel trapped Like a rat in a G*ddamned cage Sometimes it feels Like the only feelings I can feel anymore Are the ones I want to destroy And is it a coincidence..... I FEEL Like I want to destroy you? Is it chance, or circumstance? This is what you've done to me ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Sys, Very powerful feeling in this piece.. I like it very much.... Being a teen at times is so hard, don't worry though it's only temperary.... T. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love...Is it chance or circumstance... I feel like this sometimes and I'm not a teen LOL Good Poem Amy  Jenny BTW...it's in the mail ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too can relate to this, but I'd like to know why is the cage goddammed>>? ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Isis...sorry if it's innapropriate (?) I toned it down a lot..... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
And all the turtles run from me... I love that line. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It wasn't really inappropriate I honestly did wonder why the cage is 'goddammed'? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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