Dark Poetry #1 |
Childish? Not me! |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Am I am so childish to want my best, To do my best in everything I do, Am I so childish to believe so strongly, The secrets of life are within you. Am I so childish to want a magical Christmas, For my little one this year, To make it truly wonderful for him, So his Xmas memories are filled with cheer. Am I so childish cos I want to experience life, Learn new things, see new places, To see I have touched others, When I glance at their smiling faces. I don't liken it to childishness, I think of myself as a warrior, Fighting for love, peace and truth in my world, My world a little less sorrier. Is that wrong? All that I believe? Don't want a life, Where I just sit and grieve... ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Verse 2 should have all your attention. Before he has too learn about the pain that brought about the others. Some things need not be known. Best wishes for a Merry Christmas For you and the little one. -RS ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks FreeByrd ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Not childish, my dear, childlike. And let us never lose that ability completely. It would be the end of us all. DB |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
When are you gonna stop coming w/these great poems, Isis?? I cant keep up! Great job, as always! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why thankyou Starboards ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
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