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Why Did I hate You?
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Why Did I hate You? |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
I found my love: I kept it, and my love did stay. Inside I'm hurt: I hid my grudge, and my love decayed. Gradually it grew, bitterness continued to spread; It fully stretched, and my joy was finally replaced. And before my eyes, poisonous walls of hatred were built; Inside my heart, I created this enemy of peace. Through it hurt, I had no reason to keep... This grudge in me, I had no reason to hate. Why did I sow this seed? what I couldn't protect. When did my heart become a fruitless garden of grudges? And the harvest is ripe, this love I seem to have lost, Why did I hate you?..... I'm now enslaved by my thoughts. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great thoughts, perhaps you could try a different philosophy, never to hate, be hurt, let down, sad, wounded, but never hate, it only hurts YOU in the end!! I try to live this way always. Great work  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I can relate to this one a lot. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I hid my grudge, and my love decayed.. Very well done!!! Enyoyed this one ! Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"A fruitless garden"....Wonderful poem...raw with emotion...loved it. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sometimes i think it is easier to get over someone if you hold a grunge...that's how i look at my x-boyfriend right now...it hurts really bad to hate though... ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I try never to hate, dislike extremely but never HATE, it only hurts you in the end ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Inside my heart I created this enemy of peace... I'm there in that line. DB |
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