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moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

0 posted 1999-08-29 06:13 PM

A faded bleak evening
the amber still aglow
I cuddle by the fire
with a hemorrhaging soul

Groping in oblivion
to make me feel your love
something to hold on to
to convince me,all's not lost

A flicker for us to embrace
A subtle ray to declare us mates
Real enough to unmask the truth
emanating mirth on decrepit woe
Unleashing the power to configure
this disarray of antiquated grace

What I have instead,
is this searing pain
this deafening silence
this error so divine

I cuddle by the fire
holding memories close
memories, harbingers
of forth coming doom

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-08-30 03:23 AM

I have to admit that I have my favorites, and though I try to read others, I rarely have the time. But your title caught me (I love oxymoronic expression) and I'm glad it did. You have a wonderful style, and I look forward to more!

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I believe in the sand beneath my toes.
The beach gives a feeling, an earthy feeling.
I believe in the faith that grows.
-Stephan Jenkins-

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-08-30 10:45 PM

Wonderful! 'This error so divine'...great phrase. You have a way with words, the rhythm is just right and it's pulled together nicely. I like it! And I look forward to more...hope not all your stuff is dark though - with the way you put words together, bet you can do just about any style for any forum!

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

3 posted 1999-08-30 10:57 PM

"hemmorhaging soul" what a visual that brings. i like it. i may have to check out the dark side more often.

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

4 posted 1999-09-02 02:16 AM

Thanks guys, it means a lot to me..

Christopher,your kind words were such an encouragement.I look forward to your works too..You ARE one of my favorites..

PDV & Tara..Thankyou ....both for the boost & the friendship..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

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