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JP
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since 1999-05-25
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Loomis, CA

0 posted 1999-08-16 11:25 AM


Children are born
and die needless deaths,
gunfire, crack, brutal moms,
who really cares?

Lovers love and laugh
only to lose and cry
heartbreak, tragedy, suicide
who really notices?

Life revolves
and we turn with it mindlessly
jobs are lost, bankrupt, homeless
who really sees?

Humanity stuggles
through the tide of self
I am for me, screw you
who really give a damn?


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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP



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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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1 posted 1999-08-16 04:22 PM



JP,
We all give a damn to some extent or we would not be here. Sometime I think we just wish we didn't.

Michael

Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
2 posted 1999-08-16 04:34 PM


But JP is right, there are far too many who don't.
Saxoness
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3 posted 1999-08-16 05:42 PM


all I have to say, is good grief.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
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4 posted 1999-08-17 01:29 PM


How sad but true....I've found myself feeling like I didn't "give a damn".....it's an awful low that I don't wish upon anyone. Temporary though, I might add! Nowadays, I've found life is far too short to not care - how sad it would be to live your last day here on earth with that kind of attitude. I'd rather be running naked through the rain !!! (Anyone care to join me ?) LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Jimmy
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since 1999-07-17
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Oak Grove
5 posted 1999-08-17 02:10 PM


A very sad, but true poem. not enough people care these days/
Vagabond
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since 2004-01-23
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6 posted 2004-02-04 04:10 PM


I agree with the poem, tis true

Vagabon the Lost One

KristieSue
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7 posted 2004-02-04 04:46 PM


I am glad to know that I am not the only one who feels like this at times...
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