Dark Poetry #1 |
No faces |
Amy New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 1Rochester, MN, USA |
I see the people with no faces They walk slowly down the street Seeing nothing, feeling nothing They touch each other with no care behind it They try to speak but no words come out Its like there tounges have been ripped out by some invisable force One falls to the ground and others just pass by They have no eyes they can not see Holding another close is not an option Pushing othes away is all they know |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Unfortunate, the way things work... It never ceases to amaze me how people refuse to respond to those in need. It seems to worsen every day. I can't even watch the news. This is nice work, A DB |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
The lonely and forgotten You captured the essence well -RS ------------------ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Glad you could make it... and you began your time here with a good thoughtful piece! I applaud you! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A sad reality of our world. I myself am one of those who stop and lend a hand. Like DB too, I don't watch the news.. And if I haven't already said it, you got me I can't remember!! .... Welcome to Passions ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I had answered another poem, but did not welcome you, THAT is why I was confused!!! Silly me.. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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