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Amy
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since 1999-11-17
Posts 1
Rochester, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-11-17 11:49 AM


I see the people with no faces
They walk slowly down the street
Seeing nothing, feeling nothing
They touch each other with no care behind it
They try to speak but no words come out
Its like there tounges have been ripped out
by some invisable force
One falls to the ground and others just pass
by
They have no eyes they can not see
Holding another close is not an option
Pushing othes away is all they know

© Copyright 1999 Amy - All Rights Reserved
Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-17 12:10 PM


Unfortunate, the way things work...
It never ceases to amaze me how people refuse to respond to those in need. It seems to worsen every day. I can't even watch the news.

This is nice work, A

DB

FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-17 01:41 PM


The lonely and forgotten

You captured the essence well

-RS

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-11-17 08:24 PM


Welcome to the family! Glad you could make it... and you began your time here with a good thoughtful piece! I applaud you!

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-17 08:32 PM


A sad reality of our world. I myself am one of those who stop and lend a hand. Like DB too, I don't watch the news.. And if I haven't already said it, you got me I can't remember!! .... Welcome to Passions

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-17 08:57 PM


I had answered another poem, but did not welcome you, THAT is why I was confused!!! Silly me..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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