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eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 1999-11-16 07:07 PM

Here goes...

I close the door behind me,
It shatters just like glass
the sleet has settled quietly
On entities I pass.

My fingers are so brittle.
the frost is biting me.
Arrys of airy snow drift by.
How cold can your heart be?

The wind begins to chase me.
the snowflakes hit my face.
A shiver trickles up my spine.
I need to leave this place.

A light frost coats the railing.
My hands are turning blue.
My blood is running solid.
I've lost my love for you.

Every time I take a step,
My feet cry out in throe.
Barefoot in your hailing soul,
Without a place to go.

the sky is dark as eyes wide shut,
the only light I see,
Its shing from my very being,
Illuminates from me.

a blizzard of cold misery,
It knocks me to my knees.
I cannot bring myself to stand,
but in your heart...I freeze

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-16 08:30 PM

Here goes what??? Great poem, don't be shy.. Welcome to passions by the way. And keep these poems coming!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-11-17 02:34 AM

Now that's what I call an entrance. Exquisite piece. This poem flows like a river. indeed, welcome to the Dark Forum, hope to see more from you soon.

Michael

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

3 posted 1999-11-17 04:18 PM

This is glowing. I really liked it. Particularly the Q: How cold can your heart be?
Indeed an icy interrogative.

DB

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-11-19 02:59 PM

Awesome...love stanza 2.
How cold can your heart be?
I have thought this thought of others.

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-11-19 11:43 PM

Wow....that is all I can bring myself to say.....this is awesome..

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

6 posted 1999-11-19 11:57 PM

very good read. enjoyed it immensely.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

7 posted 1999-11-20 12:12 PM

This is quite an impressive piece, very well written, the flow is nearly perfect. I can also relate to the subject matter, and it was very well expressed.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

8 posted 2000-04-15 09:59 AM

This is a great GREAT Piece. Put into words what I could not. I loved it

Daniel

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

9 posted 2000-04-15 04:20 PM

I have ran in the snow bear foot, you loose the sensation of feeling, then a burning.
this is vivid.
A big HHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLL
And a warm welcome.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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