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my angel, my wish

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-15 12:27 PM

a blessed angel came unto me,
wished i give, i give you three.

do you wish for wealth untold,
silver, or jewels, or bricks of gold.

do you wish for fortune of fame,
stardom that comes from the sound of your name.

do you wish for material things,
to be the envy of the kings.

whatever your hearts desire to own,
i will give it to you, write it in stone.

angel, i said, these wishes for free,
i need only one, not two or three.

you, this angel from above,
i only wish for your undying love.

me.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-15 06:43 AM

BEAUTIFUL

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Tammy
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 90

2 posted 1999-11-15 10:36 AM

Mo,
I absolutly love this piece... Its perfect.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-15 10:56 AM

Wonderful poem, mojar. Not a bad wish either I may add.

michael

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

4 posted 1999-11-15 06:15 PM

I love this, Mo
Lovely sentiment, Nicely expressed, wonderful style

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-11-15 06:52 PM

A wonderful wish and poem indeed

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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