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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-13 06:45 PM

I closed my eyes
And prepared to go,
Celtic visions filled my head,
Did I not say so?

To wait, or seek the medal of womanhood,
My relief a knife thrust,
Short, sweet, painless,
In whom do I trust?

Nothing can compete with silence,
A quality of ignorance,
Time has claimed me,
Is coming for me.

Now I have strayed from the path,
The fields to explore,
New meanings, venues, avenues,
I need only open the door.

Cold feel of steel,
Between my thighs,
Emotional abortion,
Do you hear my cries?

My soul screams too in agony,
The spiritless night,
An endless dream,
World encased in fright.

This is unbridled,
Straight from the dawn of time,
This is my void of nothingness,
But who committed the crime?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-14 12:50 PM

Emotional abortion....a very strong image......great work here!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-11-14 01:47 AM

Thanks SD

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-15 10:27 AM

Very powerful piece, Isis. Strong ending...loved it.

Michael

Tammy
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 90

4 posted 1999-11-15 10:30 AM

Isis,
Beautiful....
T.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

5 posted 1999-11-15 02:40 PM

Jim is smiling, I!

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-11-15 05:31 PM

Thanks Michael, I like this one too

Thanks Tammy, beautiful in a dark way of course.
Thanks DB, I loved your response, I was trying to do a bit of Jim in this one, and you saw that!! I like to think he was smiling too!! So nice you saw that and understood.Thanks

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

For_Never
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

7 posted 1999-11-16 11:04 PM

Void of nothingness...
so like to me,
shadows in the dark...

I love the word play..

EAB

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

8 posted 1999-11-16 11:35 PM

Thanks again, EAB!!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

9 posted 1999-11-19 02:40 PM

May I echo Amy's response? .........
Great work Isis

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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