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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
I cry for me I cry for you Most of all, I cry for this mirage That I live. When will sweet darkness Take me over? When will the peace of silence Sooth my soul? Not soon enough. I beg for me I beg for you Most of all I beg For forgiveness. When can I leave My torment behind? When will this path Go into wilderness of unknown? Not soon enough. I dream for me I dream for you Most of all I dream of a better day. When will I smile? When will I laugh a real laugh? Not soon enough. I die for me I die for you Most of all I die to escape the pain. When will I truely die? Then, will I escape the pain? Not soon enough. I choose for me I choose for you Most of all I choose to finish the game. Will I Loose? Will I win and celibrate with no regrets, life and death? Not soon enough. Live life my friend, And I will live on too. Learn from, do not regret the past And make the best of it all. Most important, finish the game. ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Cool piece W. Nice thought process. DB ------------------ Tongue-tied and twisted Just an Earthbound misfit... P. Floyd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I dream for you I dream for me...  Like very much  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Strong finish to an otherwise completely despairing poem. I love this piece wolf, I could feel the emotion behind it. Michael |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Thank you for your replies. This was a very emotional piece for myself to write. It means a lot to be able to put them on here, and have good replies. Thank you again, glad you like it. ------------------ Stable, opaque, immortal–all by dint Of the dear names that lie concealed within't. ==EAP== "An Enigma" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Questions we've all asked Wolf, this is some terrific stuff, and even though it was difficult thanks so much for sharing it with us all ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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