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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
once we were strangers, until destiny played into our lives, somewhere along our paths, we became intrigued with each other. casual comments and casual gestures, seem to be the normal routine. the attraction was more than what it appeared. i'm not sure when or how or why it happened, but the course had already been set into motion. wrestling with the torment that haunts my very soul, i could come to only one conclusion. an outside force had interjected, and sent us on an excursion that was magical. the electricity that flows between the two of us, carries more voltage than all of the lightning that ever touched the ground. when we are together it is a thing of beauty, that can only be matched by heavenly bodies. the power of the sun, the moon, and all the galaxies combined, do not touch the power that connects us. it overwhelms me, i had no idea that anything could be so strong, as the feelings that i have for you. we have danced the dance of lovers, yet we have only just begun. me. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
You're pushing pretty close to joy here, M. Are you sure this is dark? It's good but I'm thinking cheery thoughts and it's kind of disturbing. DB ------------------ Tongue-tied and twisted Just an Earthbound misfit... P. Floyd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I think this is truly awesome...I enjoyed these words very much  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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