Dark Poetry #1 |
Music |
Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Sweet, how sweet The sounds unbound From dusty page and genius found Joy and sorrow Lusting for life Compete for the chance to ease my strife Paper flat notes Spring to life with thunder Fill the hall with awe and wonder And soothes me When it's soft and gentle I'm caused to wax all sentimental My Music dances In every line Drugging me like blood red wine I need a glass Play on my friends Let Music's story never end DB [This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-06-1999).] [This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-10-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
DB..you make me smile This is just what I needed after alot of emotions today. Are you sure you are of this time and space?? I am caused to wax all sentimental Reading the words of Poets so inspires you!! JL ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Deep Blue, music to my ears. I find music quite inspirational and often use it to set my moods when I write. Wonderful little melody you have here. Michael |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
There are three things I couldn't live without (Besides food and water) they are 1: my boyfriend 2: Poetry and 3: Music. Nice poem, I really like it. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this very much!!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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