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My fellow man..(or another title if you will)
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My fellow man..(or another title if you will) |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
boldly treading that sacred trail.. Never thinking he shall fail.. tempting demons will wayward breath.. killing saints with no regrets.. destroying ancient lines of wissend trents burning at the stake though who pour hope.. slaughtering childer that differ from him TO their screams of anguish he pays no mind.. Forever he perches on that fine line know his doom is just a matter of time.. yet onward, while downward, he shall tread.. in his wake lies relief... and dread.. who is this creature who I so lovenly portray? Why, what other creature is so filled with disparity? ...whom other than Humanity... Edward A Beerman 11-3-98 |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Jenny clapping  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Absolutely fabulous! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Sometimes I believe this poem is a great work..ad other times, just a plagerism of the truth... EAB |
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russelle Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 21Chicago, Il. USA |
i loved it, so depressingly acurate, and seeminly unchangeable |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
No, Edward, it is it's own truth and it's timely and thought out. Well struck, wordsmith. DB ------------------ When I'm sad she comes to me With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free. --------Hendrix |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your words mimic my life...this is another very powerful piece. Beautifully done. Michael btw..title is fine |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is so very true...wonderful! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Take a bow my friend ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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