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Violent Joy |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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A violent rush, as anger surges. The fanatic push, of psychotic urges. The erratic jumble, as rage swells. The sickening calm, as madness quells. The glorified burst, in sanity's last hour. The morbid bliss, as neurosis gains power. ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I have seen adrenalin junkies take many forms. Oh, by the way....did you know "they" are watching you? You know..."them." "They" are out there, watching.... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome! I love anything to do with the madness of the mind! Well wrought JP! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Torn apart by wrath of mind, never knowing what you'll find... Neurosis eats your mind alive and swarms like bees upon hive... I understand just what you say- the madness just won't go away. You write these words as if you're me... I must say, well done, JP!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
Very well done JP, I love it. Perhaps I'll use this one for a class, no? ------------------ "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Me likes very much JP. You have steady way with words. Jenny |
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