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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
The vines tangle thickly about my feet Strangulating my limbs I can only sputter curses sweet And aim them right at him Now they're coiling 'round my waist Squeezing ever tighter A look of blood-lust on his face My head is getting lighter Eyes bulge wide and bloated tongue Falls from its gaping maw I won't last, my song is sung My screams are getting raw Tendrils wrap around my head And leaves cover bloodied eyes Her lover chuckles, "He's as good as dead." But I still can hear her sighs... DB ------------------ "But it is inevitable that they will keep changing the doors on you," he said, "because that is what they are for; and the thing is to get used to itand not let it unsettle the mind. But that would mean not jumping, and you can't. Nobody can not jump. There will be no not-jumping. Among rats, perhaps, but among people, never." ------The Door------ ===EB White=== |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"But I can still hear her sighs." now that's an ending! Those sighs will last forever too. Good job, Deep Blue. Michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I can sputter curses sweet and aim them right at him!! DB...this moves like a song of sighs. There is a fire in your soul. JL  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read...Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Much thanks to the three constants. You are all welcome to read me anytime you wish DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The sigh - what other human utterance can mean so much, so many different things. Loved the sighing line, and David I can hear the sighing of your soul too. (HUGS) ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Thanks Lisa. Hugs are welcome. DB ------------------ Motel, money, murder, madness. Let's change the mood from glad to sadness... ===MOJO=== |
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