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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Banish the thought as clouds drift past Truth is a lie...What is a lie? Then march barefoot Through the coals all white Eat strawberries and cream With your feet up on a rail Look out on an ocean storm When men float by face down The sky turns crimson And those clouds burn on DB |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow!, exquiste work here. Love the imagery. Been on the white coals a bit too often, myself. Welcome to the Dark Forum. Michael |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very nice imagery, but I don't quite understand this, especially the title. Care to explain? ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The sky turns crimson...chilling DB  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Ruminations on a third-world vacation gone way, way wrong. Everything happened here. Just my perspective, which warps it a little.As if death is not warped enough. Mahalo for viewing me, DB ------------------ When I'm sad she comes to me With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free. --------Hendrix |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
LIKED very much ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
Gol - I have floated through life face down, I think. Good poem, D.B. ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. [This message has been edited by DreadedOne (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Bravo excellent work here nice images and word usage ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Thank you all for your kind words. It means a lot to have someone read your stuff and have any appreciation for it. Most of the work is a bit abnormal here and I'm proud to fit in with the group. DB |
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