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Dark Poetry #1

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FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

0 posted 1999-11-03 05:00 PM

I see you in the morning
and feel you next to me

I look into you
and you look into me

I don't know were you come from
or where it is you go

The week is over
and I feel so damned depressed

I think of you
and feel your thoughts for me

Can't wait till Monday
to see you in the mirror
and feel you next to me.

-RS

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JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-03 05:04 PM

Love it love it love it!!!WELCOME.....stay awhile

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

2 posted 1999-11-03 05:31 PM

Very interesting. Is there more in there? I'd love to read them.

D.B.

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Mirror, mirror, I confess
I can't escape this, emptiness
No more reason to pretend
Here comes that same old feelin' again
----------------Snowblind
................STYX

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-04 01:53 AM

Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

4 posted 1999-11-04 10:58 AM

ThanX to all for the + responses.

the rookie

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[This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 11-04-1999).]

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-04 04:30 PM

Great poem, FreeByrd, been there.
Welcome to the Dark Forum.

Michael

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