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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Wooden woman Hear me shout Watch me leave Stone woman Unmoveable, unfeeling The most precious metal known to man is woman. Like gold, beautiful but cold When warmed with love, She melts Runs out of my hand, Burns my flesh D.B. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Some women are gold and cold...some made of stone...I pray to let my heartache. Ouch, this hurts a little.  JL ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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