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spoongirl28
Junior Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 27
FWB, FL USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 01:52 PM

I just can't shake this feeling
The pain won't go away
They say it will take time
I want results today.

You're in my mind constantly
Though I swore that I would not
Begin to even think of you
For my heart is in a knot.

I've given you up I said
I know it will never work
An affair is all we'll ever be
Inside I feel like dirt.

I want you still - every day
As you are with your wife
My husband sits all alone
His feelings just cause strife.

Please get yourself out of my mind
Go to the corners of the earth
Do not return to this time or place
To me you have no worth.

Yes, I still do love you
And hate you all the same
I just wish it would end
This stupid little game.

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

1 posted 1999-11-03 02:06 PM

Dangerous times, beautiful words,
Where passion's iron is hottest,
Soon strikes the hammer of vengeance.

Please be careful...I love your work.

D.B.

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Mirror, mirror, I confess
I can't escape this, emptiness
No more reason to pretend
Here comes that same old feelin' again
----------------Snowblind
................STYX

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-03 04:56 PM

Spoon, You say everything that I have always wanted to say. CLAPPING !!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

spoongirl28
Junior Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 27
FWB, FL USA

3 posted 1999-11-03 07:10 PM

Thanks for the votes of confidence you all...this has been a very painful part of my life recently and the only way I know to work thru it is thru my writing!

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Spoongirl28

The time to live is now......

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-04 01:52 AM

Nicely done.Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-04 04:18 PM

"I want results today!"...hehe, whoever said patience was a virtue must have had no heart.
Good poem, spoongirl.

Michael

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