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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
I am hidden, feeling lost want to fly and know myself tried to run from that which is known when I lost: the world is gone. Where is home? insane peak Missed her when I begin Feel alone, within the end Tried to hide, he came again took my art, reasons to live Hate myself! Now I win from my time, lost again Why I cry is why I live.... The pain that was me, turned me out.... Alone forever, not to end. Forever loved, never again.. when will that hope cease to be... when I lose that.. that which is me.. Edward A. Beerman 7-97 (original) 11-99 (revised) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Those last three sentences struck me hard.  Jenny |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
why i cry is why i live... wa-freakin'-hoo!! this is on fire for me ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, pain and life sometimes seem one and the same. Very cutting poem. Michael |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this one....Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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