Dark Poetry #1 |
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Wandering...... |
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spoongirl28 Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 27FWB, FL USA |
Wandering, searching, hunting..... For the one thing I can't find Looking in peoples' faces Slowly losing my mind. Trying out different hobbies But nothing seems to work Just a glimpse is all I'm asking But I don't know where it lurks. Every day is like the last The routine goes on and on Impossible it seems to me But for it I truly long Wandering, searching, hunting.... For with it would come bliss The only thing I'm looking for Is peaceful happiness. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I found this very absorbing Spoon. The last stanza did me in!! May we both find peaceful happiness ![]() Jenny ![]() |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Very urgent sense I am picking out of this. Urgent, yet prolonged. It touches upon that rare vision that unfortunatly all but a few seem to get but a passing glance upon. I, to wish that you find your happiness, and seize upon it as a rapor in the hunt. Aim not for contentment, for it doesn't exist. Very compelling. Sorry for rambling. Edward A. Beerman " the forest is burning, and we are the flame. Who knows why we are so...but forever we will...Of this we know." EAB, 'Life;' |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Good job Spoongirl, it's what we all search for I think. Michael |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Hey Spoon, Don't give up the search... There's so much for you to share Enjoying, DB ------------------ The moon was bright overhead when I reembarked in the pinnace to return to my ship. A chill night breeze came whispering down from the depths of the valley, and suddenly the place was full of ghosts,-shadows of men alive and dead,- my own among them. ========Mutiny on the Bounty==== ========Nordhoff and Hall==== |
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