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Dark Poetry #1

A Final Word

OBLIVION
Junior Member

since 1999-10-04

Posts 21

0 posted 1999-10-29 10:59 PM

Fade to red,
Dripping and pale
"Neath the steel
A rush with struggle
Attempting a bit of hope
Then drowning in the emptiness.
Sorrow slipping tidy ropes,
"Round the neck of frail will
Tightening while gasping
For the breath of fight.
This world I care not for.
This night will become endless
In minutes..
I'll have my final dance
With pain
My last struggle with with fear
And a first union,
With sharpness of the darkest lover
Teasing, slipping, and hungry
Searching for final and ultimate pain,
Wet with warmth of freshly sliced skin,
And newly pouring blood.
I fear not the swim in that shallow pool.
Soon my flickering light will be expelled.
Goodbye.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-29 11:02 PM

This degree of darkness likes me much this night. I can feel the potential pain within this piece.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-30 11:49 AM

Dark, indeed. Love the imagery.

Michael

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-30 04:24 PM

So depressing, I like the poem, but I hope you don't act on these feelings....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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