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D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-10-29 05:08 PM

Melancholy grinds me to my bones
And proffers the lyric of my moans
Sweeps joy and love to a freefall pit
Wrecks lasting peace on a rocky spit
Wonder lost, I'm hypnotized
Dread and fear are realized
Tripping over Hate's vile form
With nothing on to keep me warm
Surrounded by the cares of life
Preoccupied with icy strife
There's naught but grief to fill my days
And wrap me in a brutish haze
There's no escape for such as me
Except for sleep 'neath darkened seas.

10/29/99

Much gratitude to all for the inspiration to break my block. All that's left is to sweep away the debris. This one is a start. My first newling in over a year.

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He soils the sanctity of that which is perfect and wonders why he is shunned by all.

[This message has been edited by D.B. Whyte (edited 10-29-1999).]

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-29 05:59 PM

Awe, glad you got thr pen rolling again, D.B., this is exquisite. Welcome to the Dark Forum.

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Michael Anderson

And after-drunkeness of soul
Succeeds the glory of the bowl -
An idle longing night and day
To dream my very life away

EAP

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

2 posted 1999-10-29 06:10 PM

Thanks Michael,
You and the crew are my life's breath as a writer right now and I can only say please keep writing. I need you all.

D.B./slomovingvehicle

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-30 12:34 PM

From Melancholy Grinds to the Darkened Seas.
These words are powerful and deeply touched me.

Jenny Lee

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-30-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-10-30 04:31 PM

This is a great piece indeed-Glad to see you've lost the writers block.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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