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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Where am I? of that.. I do not care... I want to fade... and never return.. slip away.. just forgettingmy grip.. Hate when I feel, feeling alone.. Hate to be..being alive.. all I've lost is all I have! I gave more... more than I had. Now alone..and alone inside.. Lost without...and within.. Was it ever mine? was that dance a dream? can I relate, even to myself? I need to know, need nothing at all... endurance has came, and left me behind.. Draining my soul with that smile.. ...My soul? am I..will I ever be? I was entangled.. when she set me free.. again I am lost..again.. Were they there...as mine flowed? true and deep.. emptied by loss.. never to feel the gain.. secluded in the world with others all around. Is the decade really ever won or lost? but...does it really matter? feelings left...empty souls revealed.. Who am I? and waas I really ever me, will I ever be? I am just this shell all that people see I am lost.. and, never truly found.. Trapped within, so never seen.. Never will they know.. the pain, the pain! The pain I reap... Edward A. Beerman 8-30-97 |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Pain, indeed. Well understood feelings here. Good job, For_Never. ------------------ Michael Anderson And after-drunkeness of soul Succeeds the glory of the bowl - An idle longing night and day To dream my very life away EAP |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Ok, I really love this one...the format, the message, the wistful sense of melancholy laced with agony- I can relate to this one in many ways- I may not know the pain you reap, but you expressed it well enough to remind me of the pain I reap.... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thank you. I often fall back on those feelings..but...now they seem to be more shadows of what they once were.. EAB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hey we miss you around here For Never  Merry Christmas my friend Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Loved this read Edward Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Came back for a second read, really like this one Edward!! At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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