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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-10-27 04:27 PM

Burning breezes blister my skin
Standing here alone
I see hopelessness for change,
no second chances
Dead in this lively skin,
burrowed deep in shadow

What brought upon this curse I ask,
for I know not of why I'm haunted
My stomach twisted into a pretzel
and my mind clmbing towards insanity

This dry rain falling upon my face
is a constant reminder of my opaque state.
I swear it could go forever this way
Not even in sleep do I dream anymore

Now as I move across nature's white blanket
a deep sorrow within sings a brooding melody
The chill is seeping into my bones
And I remind myself that it's better this way
Some people were meant to be alone

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-10-27 07:43 PM

This poem reminds me of how i felt when my boyfriend broke up w/me...i can feel the emotions pouring out of this poem! well done!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-10-27 08:34 PM

I know the felling of being alone quite well. like life as of now is a great example.
OH WELL.
VERY GOOD POEM I TRULY MEAN VERY GOOD

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-27 10:25 PM

...for I know not why I am haunted....just one line out of a really good verse that
says so much

The last stanza echoes emotions that stir my soul....happy to see your words here again

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-28 01:38 AM

Well done.I too can relate to this.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-10-28 05:37 AM

"Loneliness isn't in being alone,
Loneliness is alone in being."

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

6 posted 1999-10-29 05:52 PM

This feels like a dream I had where I was standing in a mirror and watching things happen to me from the inside. Well struck blessed poet.

D.B./slomovingvehicle

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