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cullin
New Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 4
houston tx

0 posted 1999-10-27 06:39 AM

at what point
do you lose your sanity
when does solitude
in a ****ed up world
become too much
when does silence
become a conversation
with a man
noone sees
when do the pictures
become blurred
distorted untill
past present and future
collide into one supernova
of dillusional thought
when does a commpasionate word
become misconstrued
into a personal inquisition
ravaging your mind
and soal
when tell me when
so i can stop

dennis

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"imagination is more important than knowledge" albert einstine

"no matter how pretty the cemetary, its still full of corpses" my friend aaryn

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-10-27 07:42 PM

WOw! this one mad me think! Ouch!!! it hurts to think! I loved it!!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-27 10:52 PM

a supernova of (delusive) thought would make this really shine...as no truer words could
be written

I love what you've written
in this.

I have felt many a time as
if I were in an inquest or a room deafened by silence;from just offering who I am to others.Well Done.

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 01:44 AM

Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-10-28 05:38 AM

When does reality slap you in the face, eh?
Got me very early on...

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

5 posted 1999-10-29 05:49 PM

Grabs you by the throat and doesn't release till it takes your breath

D.B./slomovingvehicle

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