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suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-24 08:38 PM

Hold your head high,
so that it can be severed.

Walk in a straight line,
so your feet dissapear with one swath.

Respect your elders,
and watch them die before you.

Be kind to others,
so they remove your heart.

Have faith in god.
and die a slow demise.

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life is short kill quick

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-24 08:56 PM

A lot said here in just a few lines...very powerful statement. Sometimes the rules just don't seem worth the rewards, do they?

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-10-24 08:58 PM

Hardly ever they truly seem worth the effort at the end.

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-24 09:20 PM

SD,how true!!
Be kind to others
so they remove your heart.
Been waiting more words from you and did you ever deliver

Jenny

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-10-24 09:26 PM

thanks Jenny. Yeah im gonna post and reply more now that the damn writters block is diminishing

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life is short kill quick

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

5 posted 1999-10-24 11:03 PM

Ok, this is one of my favorites of yours....Perhaps a more catching title is in order? Rules and consequences....sounds like a school flyer.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

6 posted 1999-10-24 11:08 PM

I like the title Amy cause it speaks the truth

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life is short kill quick

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-25 01:46 AM

So much said in so few lines.Sad but true facts.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

8 posted 1999-10-25 04:35 AM

Wow...powerful words. Good job.

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