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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-10-17 09:29 PM

Terror

Fright

Numbing pain
is all I feel
save
for each
lover's caress
that draws
crimson lines
of love
in malleable flesh
that trickles slowly
to pool
beside
me

I taste
of my love
of her inner
secret self
with gentle
stinging
licks
along her
softened curves
while my tongue
lashes
at the softness
of her thighs
and breast

He arcs
towards me
flashing kisses
of dancing light
across
my dubious mind
I don't want this
as he penetrates
my flesh
parting
my swollen folds
sliding smoothly in
with
sticky warmth
flowing out of me

I plunge deeper
into her
with each
manic stroke
she writhes away
from
my promised
release
her ejaculate
runs red
with the hunger
of my own release
building
with a final stroke
to a crescendo
forcing myself
deep into her
with my
last stroke

Awareness
fades
with each
plunging stroke
gone numb
from this violation
of self
my flesh
desecrated
by this willfully
blind lover
my last thought
and smile
that I endured
rape
by the blade

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

1 posted 1999-10-17 09:35 PM

An intriguing read, gives me chills this one does.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-10-17 09:36 PM

I liked this Dream.. it has the same flavor of Ache for the Blade. Interesting twist on it.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-18 12:00 PM

I absolutely LOVE this one. Especially the changing of viewpoints. Great work....twisted.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-10-18 01:02 AM

Wow Soul-Brother, very chilling, loved it well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Julie Jordan Scott
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 146
Bakersfield, CA USA

5 posted 1999-10-18 01:34 AM

Reading this series has so intrigued me....I am thoroughly convinced now that these pieces are not dark at all, but rather symbolic of bursting forth with life through the love and passion of another.

Truly they are best read a few times, and not just with a quick perusal....but taking the time to breathe them in deeply into the center of your being.....and breathing out the message beyond the Blade.

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at
http://www.5passions.com

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 1999-10-18 02:01 AM

Well brother, yet again you have outdone yourself.
With each new installment, I find a new "favorite" out of the series. It is rare indeed that a sequel matches or does better than the original, and even less common for furter ones to do the same. Here, you are creating a masterful legacy with your words.
Write on brother, please write on!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-10-18 02:08 AM

Very well written Dream, although the subject matter does not agree with me, the poetic value certainly does

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

8 posted 1999-10-18 12:17 PM

I love so the style of which you wrote this one!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-10-19 03:42 AM

As I expected.....Fabulous!! Your imagery was fantastic,Chilling indeed. Loved it!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

10 posted 1999-10-19 11:48 AM

Caution is the only folly of the truely wise
Fear the only barrier in a twisted mind

You cleared the barrier
Or your caution is gone

the world is open to you

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

11 posted 1999-10-23 11:06 PM

Delicious ... I especially liked the dialogue flavor of this one. Another well-done.

PS: Free verse suits you -- and she is a very willing lover. Explore her, my friend.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

12 posted 1999-10-24 11:23 PM

Sounds like some of the nasty stuff over at that other place you hang out at. You nasty boy.

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

13 posted 1999-10-25 04:39 AM

Wow!...talk about intense...this gives me chills.

Dread

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