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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Nothing is right. it is ruined. All in blight. It is all ruined. Destruction in sight. It is all ruined. Nature had might. It is all ruined. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
AMEN AMEN! Happy to read your words again!!!   Jenny |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I do agree that humanity has erased all power nature once had...good poem. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
great word usage and sentences! I loved it! keep em' coming!  ------------------ If you love something let it go, if it comes back to you it's yours, if it doesnt then it never was" [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).] [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sad and true.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
You have struck well and deep, very concise and understandable. A pleasurable read, sd. Sorry,Tom. DB ------------------ "But it is inevitable that they will keep changing the doors on you," he said, "because that is what they are for; and the thing is to get used to itand not let it unsettle the mind. But that would mean not jumping, and you can't. Nobody can not jump. There will be no not-jumping. Among rats, perhaps, but among people, never." ------The Door------ ===EB White=== [This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-07-1999).] |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
thx to all of you for replying to this one for when i posted it i didnt think it would recieve anything ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So true!! The only thing as human beings we have helped in nature is the cockroach. He will have the last laugh I'm sure of that!! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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