Dark Poetry #1 |
...by that time... |
starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
You think I'm over-reacting and that my sadness is not true You claim that you are happy but part of me still lives in you You won't notice it at first but, don't worry, you soon will One night it will hit you like a 1000 bricks and you'll realize that you love me still But when that night comes and you'll realize I that was your dream come true I won't be there, you see because by that time I'll be over you ****************************************************************************************** [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).] [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Way to go! Liked this much!!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
You tell 'em starboards. Let him know that you will get over the pain you have and find something better. I have enjoyed reading everything you have written.....hope to see more soon. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
How true is this.great poem ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks all of you who have written replies to many of my poems i have summited...at times it was better than therapy...poems are a way of expressing my emotions and you guys have let me do so, thanks again! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LOVED THIS!! Jenny |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very good. Brings a smile to my face, for in ways, it relates to my current situation. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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