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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Meloncholy shivers Restless silver moon Purple lightning strikes And nobody cares Meloncholy shivers A bloody babe is born Watching with detachment Mommy doesn't care Meloncholy shivers Apathy sets in Dreams are shattered daily I don't care Meloncholy shivers Cobalt like the sea No one around Does anyone care? Meloncholy shivers Wistful breezes Crimson tongues with vaseline spit You never cared..... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Crimson tongues w.vaseline spit!!! You are on a roll!!! Jenny  |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
imagery rules.you pulled this one off well ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
OK Sys...I don't get it...enlighten me will you? I followed right up to the vaseline part....do tell! |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Crimson tongues with vaseline spit.... Tongues that have other's blood on them, while coated with vaseline that makes their words slip through into the mind better, so another can be more easily decieved. Basically,even thought the person is obviously guilty of hurting another, their lies are so slippery that they make their way in before there is a chance to wonder whether it is a truth or a lie. Clear things up, Chris? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good read here.Liked this one! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A very impressive work Sys. ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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