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Acies
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Twilight Zone

0 posted 2000-06-09 01:21 PM



Unanswered questions
Prayers left on deaf ears
Criticized actions
Life is full of tears

Feelings full of anger
Feelings full of hate
Still loving her
Though all is too late

Surrounded by secrets
Two faced friends
Surrounded by lies
Waiting for all to end

Head facing the ground
Hands raised to the sky
Happiness can't be found
All I can do is cry

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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1 posted 2000-06-09 01:34 PM


Life sucks I guess...same for me too..but don't really care..things may group together only by fate's design and nothing can be done by you..its foolish to be anxious over something that may or may not happen..so get on wiht the present..you may not know what's gonna happen tomorrow
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2000-06-09 06:37 PM


I liked this very much acire,

Head facing the ground
Hands raised to the sky
Happiness can't be found
All I can do is cry


I know how you feel here.
great poem!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Acies
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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2000-06-10 12:12 PM


thanks for understanding
lost my so called good friends
so, this is the only place now where I could let my feelings out

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-06-10 01:07 PM


I once lost faith in a lot of things maybe i never had faith in them in the first place but if you look towards the negative eventually all you will see is the negative.
REally enjoyed this poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged
Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned "

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.




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