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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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I am me |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
I know that when you see me You only see who you want it to be You can't never see me for who the real person is It seems like there is something about me that you miss You miss my passion that binds us together You forget my love, so precious and pure My care and concern that I show you Even when you're ungrateful, I shower you more You never fail to bring hurt, to make me cry There is no reason why You cannot stop treating me like this Has all humanity in you cease to exist Please stop this I can't take it anymore the pain I'm going through, I wish to forget There is only so much of this I can endure This is me and that's that LeeAnne 8/6/2000 [This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
LeeAnne - wow, this poem is written soooo well. So many variables in it. A love gone sour? Someone who is taken for granted? Two people grown, differ, two separate lives... It certainly tells of someone who is very unhappy in a relationship. I hope it is not you. If it is, (((hugs))), and I hope everything turns out okay. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
HI I defintely see there's no sharing in love n the relationship turns sour and bitter. the painful truth is its very difficult when there is just one feeling love and other reacts in a cold hearted manner your world spins around.. Sincerely A_L |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
HI I defintely see there's no sharing in love n the relationship turns sour and bitter. the painful truth is its very difficult when there is just one feeling love and other reacts in a cold hearted manner your world spins around.. Sincerely A_L |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
when will me be enough? or will it ever be? your poems echoes thoughts i also have within me. very good work!!  kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I admire anyone who can say these words. You have to be true to yourself.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
IF you care to look back through my past posts you will see similar words coming from my mouth too hon. I know exactly what you are talking about and going through. Perhaps you can do as I and focus on yourself, become the best human being you are capable of becoming, then those thoughts and positives alone tell you - yes you are a wonderful person everyone loves, you are worthy of anyone and anything, so then the person making you feel that way, is lesser, you can see it, realise, believe it..... I've done that and now at the end of the tunnel I can say I am a much better person now, more spiritual (not only God but emotionally, - in the soul) etc than I was two years ago. I love having discovered the real me and all the good and bad that is part of the entity known round here as Isis. If you wanna talk anytime email me hon and thanks for the other email. Great strong words, go girl!!!!!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Thank you for your comments and this is what I do believe. You have to be you when you are in an relationship, if you partner doesn't accept you for what you are then he/she is not worth it. Individuality must be shown. I wrote this from my personal experience and I hope you have enjoyed it.  [This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hi LeeAnne just read your first four lines i'm sorry but it seems like he doesn't really care about the real you. he only cares for the one he wants to. He tries to make u out as a person that you r not. i hope he changes that and finally brings you happiness |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Its really too late for that but thank you for your kind words.... |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
In this poem, I want to be who I am. Well, now that I am, I am pleased. [This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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