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LeeAnne Dk
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since 2000-06-07
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0 posted 2000-06-08 06:51 AM


I know that when you see me
You only see who you want it to be
You can't never see me for who the real person is
It seems like there is something about me that you miss
You miss my passion that binds us together
You forget my love, so precious and pure
My care and concern that I show you
Even when you're ungrateful, I shower you more
You never fail to bring hurt, to make me cry
There is no reason why
You cannot stop treating me like this
Has all humanity in you cease to exist
Please stop this I can't take it anymore
the pain I'm going through, I wish to forget
There is only so much of this I can endure
This is me and that's that
    
            LeeAnne 8/6/2000



[This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-09-2000).]

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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-08 06:57 AM


LeeAnne - wow, this poem is written soooo well.  So many variables in it.  A love gone sour?  Someone who is taken for granted?  Two people grown, differ, two separate lives...  It certainly tells of someone who is very unhappy in a relationship.  I hope it is not you.  If it is, (((hugs))), and I hope everything turns out okay.
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-08 06:10 PM


HI
I defintely see there's no sharing in love n the relationship turns sour and bitter. the painful truth is its very difficult when there is just one feeling love and other reacts in a cold hearted manner your world spins around..

Sincerely
A_L

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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3 posted 2000-06-08 06:11 PM


HI
I defintely see there's no sharing in love n the relationship turns sour and bitter. the painful truth is its very difficult when there is just one feeling love and other reacts in a cold hearted manner your world spins around..

Sincerely
A_L

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-08 06:16 PM


when will me be enough?  or will it ever be?  your poems echoes thoughts i also have within me.  very good work!!  

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2000-06-08 07:10 PM


I admire anyone who can say these words. You have to be true to yourself.  
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-06-08 09:54 PM


IF you care to look back through my past posts you will see similar words coming from my mouth too hon.  I know exactly what you are talking about and going through.
Perhaps you can do as I and focus on yourself, become the best human being you are capable of becoming, then those thoughts and positives alone tell you - yes you are a wonderful person everyone loves, you are worthy of anyone and anything, so then the person making you feel that way, is lesser, you can see it, realise, believe it.....
I've done that and now at the end of the tunnel I can say I am a much better person now, more spiritual (not only God but emotionally, - in the soul) etc than I was two years ago.  I love having discovered the real me and all the good and bad that is part of the entity known round here as Isis.
If you wanna talk anytime email me hon and thanks for the other email.
Great strong words, go girl!!!!!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



LeeAnne Dk
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 32

7 posted 2000-06-08 11:25 PM


Thank you for your comments and this is what I do believe. You have to be you when you are in an relationship, if you partner doesn't accept you for what you are then he/she is not worth it. Individuality must be shown. I wrote this from my personal experience and I hope you have enjoyed it.  

[This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-09-2000).]

Acies
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8 posted 2000-06-09 12:03 PM


hi LeeAnne

just read your first four lines
i'm sorry but it seems like he doesn't really care about the real you. he only cares for the one he wants to.  He tries to make u out as a person that you r not.
i hope he changes that and finally brings you happiness

LeeAnne Dk
Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32

9 posted 2000-06-10 12:27 PM


Its really too late for that but thank you for your kind words....
LeeAnne Dk
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 32

10 posted 2000-06-10 12:29 PM


In this poem, I want to be who I am. Well, now that I am, I am pleased.  


[This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-10-2000).]

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