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Dark Poetry #1

You Won't Get In My Heart

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:41 PM

You can touch my lips, but can't touch my heart,
you can think we're close when we're so far apart,
you can look into my eyes, but can't see into my mind,
you can think you know when really, you're so blind,
you can say,"I love you," thinking i'll believe your lies,
you can look so sweet, but I know it's a disguise,
you can hold my hand, but can't hold my love,
there are so many things you think you know of,
you can touch my arm or caress my face,
but won't get in my heart for it's a sacred place.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:46 PM

Yes kid the heart is a sacred place.

But if you post to many in one day Isis will put a block on your replys

And you have so much to write and get replys on, take your time kid. haha
just a little note. that's all.

love your writing kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-06 06:01 AM

This is a good one. It's good to be on your guard , but one should never block oneself completely from sharing love with someone else. Unfortunately too many people do that ...

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

3 posted 2000-06-06 01:20 PM

boy oh boy. these are the words my heart is screaming. i really needed to read this today. thank you thank you thank you. i understand, relate, and am right there myself. trust none i feel. it will only let you down. you got a masterpiece here. keep it up!!!

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

4 posted 2000-06-06 01:25 PM

Hi AnGeLiX17
That was a nice read. Heart is a sacred place which can hold only one we love and care about as you rightly said and can't change with seasons as some might do.

Sincerely
A_L

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