Dark Poetry #1 |
Bride to her Beloved............#3 in the Vampire Series |
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Bride to her Beloved He was the dark magic maker A mere once mortal man Traveled through hell’s half acre To make her his queen, now damned His constant companion and lover Reborn by him to darkness So many secrets to uncover His gift given, no less Love be their conviction In discovery of Heaven and Hell A future beyond prediction Knowledge through his death knell She rouses through birth pangs Flawless and perfect, in every way Hungering, to use new firm fangs Alas, but soon the light of day Her mortal body dead and gone Now she slumbers in coffin Glimpsed, her last break of dawn Sleep now, as he has done so often Awaken…….As the bride, to her beloved Marina May 2000 |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
So much like the tale of Rice's, I love V's I have a whole collection, tapes books. haha God so many, I love this little series. Thanks Marina. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
Now that you mention it I can see specific phrases that remind me of Rice's stories as well. I've read so many vampire stories that it's hard to find something new. I too have quite a collection. The line I found most striking was "Knowledge through his death knell" I prefer the idea of rebirth in vampires as opposed to a curse. A refreshing poem. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Beautiful, dark, enigmatic... the way a vampire is. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you to all of you... These series of Vampire poems are in fact based on the Anne Rice novels. I very much enjoyed them and couldn't help themself in writing a little poetry on them. Marina |
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