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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
Turning a page Hidden Rage Afraid of the phase Life is like a maze Two babies as confused as me What will we all grow up to be? Have I made permanent scars on their lifes? Fear of the future cuts like knifes Is "Happy" a real emotion? Because for me it is only a notion |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
If the babies are your's then yes happy is truly in hand, be a rock for them and yourself, just breath take the little things in hand, Such a mornful poem, makes my heart hurt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I loved the line "What will we all grow up to be?" I have felt this before, too, although these words never occurred to me. I also loved the correlation between "permanent scars" and the fear of the future cutting "like knives." This is an excellent summary of a mother's fears. Great work. |
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