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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:14 PM


Hell

We're stuck here,
in this crazy, relentless world,
that we call home,
confined to our worst fears,
the only thing we bleed is tears,
we sit and pray and wonder if "God" hears,
we should not have listened to our peers,
'cause now we're here,
with nothing to hold dear,
it all left us sad and depressed,
the whole purpose of our lives has now regressed,
guess we'll just wait,
it all has to do with our fate,
anyway there's nothing left to hate,
we're in Hell.



© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-06-06 12:51 PM


Hell is man made not what I want in my life.
I don't think you do ether, you can climb out of it.

This is a great expression kid. you do have a way with a pen. keep writing.
A HHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLL ing welcome from
Me.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

2 posted 2000-06-06 07:02 AM


Like the rhyme scheme very sure very pure

an old soul
in a young mind
creates the beauty
we long to see

 "Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!- prophet still, if bird or devil!-
Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted-
On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore-
Is there- is there balm in Gilead?- tell me- tell me, I implore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-06 07:12 PM


Welcome !!!  Great expression here, I really liked it.  Hell or life is what WE MAKE IT!!  You may be in hell now, but you can climb out of the abyss with love and hope  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
4 posted 2000-06-06 07:16 PM


Hi Angel
Fears should be conquered .I don't know how it can be done but it's possible. Live your everyday with hope for a better tomorrow and finally it may turn out to be true.

Sincerely
A_L

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