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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-06-05 04:17 AM



yes
invade my swirling sadness
smile away this
swerving madness
wither my unnatural
fear

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Poertree
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
1 posted 2000-06-05 05:39 AM


L

you are good at this aren't you ..... lol

Philip

PS that's a statement btw not a question ..lol

Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
2 posted 2000-06-05 06:59 AM


Life is chaos...makes me dizzy, too.  Good poem.
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-06-05 10:10 AM


I wish it could be so simple...but it's the simplicity that arises paranoia and even more fear. Maybe it's better this way...

Great poem lotharingia

Angel


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-06 12:10 PM



It makes me chase my tail. until I'm dizzy.

Short and great. what we strive for .

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-06-06 05:52 AM


Hey, thanks for all your comments. Before I came here I was thinking about giving up on poetry!
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
6 posted 2000-06-06 02:01 PM


short but profound.  my fave kind

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC
7 posted 2000-06-06 05:49 PM


Short n Sweet yet says so much... love it!! Keep writing.

~*^Goodbye the future's sold out- there's no use screaming, who thought we'd ever get this far...^*~

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