Dark Poetry #1 |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
yes invade my swirling sadness smile away this swerving madness wither my unnatural fear |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
L you are good at this aren't you ..... lol Philip PS that's a statement btw not a question ..lol |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Life is chaos...makes me dizzy, too. Good poem. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I wish it could be so simple...but it's the simplicity that arises paranoia and even more fear. Maybe it's better this way... Great poem lotharingia Angel Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It makes me chase my tail. until I'm dizzy. Short and great. what we strive for . Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hey, thanks for all your comments. Before I came here I was thinking about giving up on poetry! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
short but profound. my fave kind kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
Short n Sweet yet says so much... love it!! Keep writing. ~*^Goodbye the future's sold out- there's no use screaming, who thought we'd ever get this far...^*~ |
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