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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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You say he makes you happy You say he makes you smile Sorry, but I'm not happy By him you've been beguiled I thought that you were smarter I thought that you were stong Your heart and soul you've bartered This devils deal so wrong Well, you'll always be my friend Even after all this And I'll be there at the end When you discover you're just another on the list ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
That was a good piece of work. I like your cynisism. You don't seem too afraid to confront people with reality. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And that is a true friend Sven, you I mean, even though you see their mistakes, you will still be there at the end as a loving friend if needed. Yours is a special heart  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
fractal, thank you. . . sometimes, we need a good dose of reality. . . Isis, it's all I can do. . .it's who I am. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
It's late, I'm tired, and fractal and Isis have pretty much said what I was going to say but I still wanted to put in my 2 cents. (or however that saying goes) Anyhow, a great poem Sven...it shows that you are a true friend and honest...this person is lucky to know you. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The best kind of friend is the one who will always speak the truth, and always be there! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've met someone like the friend of your friend---will e you later with a poem I wrote about it---hopefully it will cheer you up--(it's kind of mean) grins.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DE, thank you for taking the time to respond. . . I appreciate it. . . Eagle One, you are correct my friend. . . and thank you. . . serenity, thank you, and I will look forward to the poem that you're going to send me, I'm sure that it will help. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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