Dark Poetry #1 |
The Mourning After |
DarkEnchantress's BF New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 8 |
The loneliness and sorrow will linger even worse tommorow Without the feeling we had I'll always be less 'Cause all I ever cared about was the very best I remember all the sweet things we used to say I still remember loving you more day by day I cherish the memories we shared, and how some things we never dared Everything we did meant something special 'Cause to me you were essential For you I had so much love, And that love was as pure as a dove Your smile had always made me feel right And nothing was better then holding you tight You meant ever so much to me You were the only thing I ever cared to see When I woke up in the morning, I wished you were there and when I realized you might be thinking the same, there went my care When I went to sleep at night snuggling with you I wished, But all I had at night was how much it was you I missed I always remembered all during the day I wished I could just see you to say hey I remember waiting 'till you were ready for our first kiss And then I remember cherishing it and thats what I miss I remember ever so much how much I really gave you all my care, And now without you I dont see how I can hardly bare And with all my love I write this for you to know your the one I'll always miss |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
This is well written and it speaks volumes. I like the play on words in the title. [This message has been edited by Jana Tovey (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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DarkEnchantress's BF New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 8 |
Thankiez Jana [This message has been edited by DarkEnchantress's BF (edited 06-03-2000).] |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
That was a nice poem. It is a good one to read with some music in the background. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hey BF, you did a great job with this one, It makes me wonder if I'm not getting to dark with my poetry. I like the swing with your words. Great job kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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