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Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 2000-06-01 11:30 AM


Slowly,
gently,
I come to you in the night
stealing,
barefoot,
into your dreams.

Softly,
quietly,
hidden from the light,
I creep,
unseen,
unheard,
unfelt,
sowing the seeds of my poison,
taking your will,
your soul
and bending,
slowly bending,
bending them to my own.

Guard well your dreams,
for I will take them all
for I am the demon within,
yes,
I am the demon called Love.


© Copyright 2000 Colin Ramage - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-06-01 11:35 AM


Demon...yes love is indded this!
I throughly enjoyed this and the imagery is wonderful.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
2 posted 2000-06-01 06:42 PM


ACCCCCK I met him the other night! Scary guy!
Great poem Eric and great to see ya back amonth ranks again.
~H

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-02 01:13 AM


He is a demon you love or hate but all the same he is necessary in our lives!!
Well don  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
4 posted 2000-06-02 03:56 AM


A-a   Glad ya liked it... it was one of those poems I just "had to write" and the imagery seemed to flow as I was writing, like it had a life of its own!

X... to have a poem called "Great" by you is truly praise indeed and ta muchly for the warm welcome. My poetry has been a bit thin on the ground of late, but I seem to be going through an "able to write stuff" spell so hopefully more soon  

And Isis, thanks for your reply   Yup, you're right of course, we all need a bit of that scary old demon in our lives!

now, I think, time to try and write another... thankyou all for the encouragement  

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-06-02 07:14 PM


Yes we do need this demon. haha
but who the heck said it was a guy??
hahaha

anyway it was fun to read.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

6 posted 2000-06-02 07:54 PM


I like th imagery in this poem.  Although I've never experienced this demon first hand, it seems like he's a pretty scary fellow!

Nice work!

Necro Draconis
Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115

7 posted 2000-06-02 08:07 PM


I loved it! Creepy, yet not so creepy. HEHE

 By Necro Draconis

Let nature guide your soul.

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