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Dreamtime demon. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England 
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Slowly, gently, I come to you in the night stealing, barefoot, into your dreams. Softly, quietly, hidden from the light, I creep, unseen, unheard, unfelt, sowing the seeds of my poison, taking your will, your soul and bending, slowly bending, bending them to my own. Guard well your dreams, for I will take them all for I am the demon within, yes, I am the demon called Love. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Demon...yes love is indded this! I throughly enjoyed this and the imagery is wonderful. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ACCCCCK I met him the other night! Scary guy! Great poem Eric and great to see ya back amonth ranks again. ~H |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
He is a demon you love or hate but all the same he is necessary in our lives!! Well don  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A-a Glad ya liked it... it was one of those poems I just "had to write" and the imagery seemed to flow as I was writing, like it had a life of its own! X... to have a poem called "Great" by you is truly praise indeed and ta muchly for the warm welcome. My poetry has been a bit thin on the ground of late, but I seem to be going through an "able to write stuff" spell so hopefully more soon  And Isis, thanks for your reply Yup, you're right of course, we all need a bit of that scary old demon in our lives!now, I think, time to try and write another... thankyou all for the encouragement |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes we do need this demon. haha but who the heck said it was a guy?? hahaha anyway it was fun to read. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like th imagery in this poem. Although I've never experienced this demon first hand, it seems like he's a pretty scary fellow! Nice work! |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
I loved it! Creepy, yet not so creepy. HEHE By Necro Draconis Let nature guide your soul. |
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