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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-05-31 11:22 AM


As You Feed

Carressing the sweet deamon within
bathing in its foul sin.
Taking what it needs
groweling contently as it feeds.
Savoring my souls existance
sliding down forked tongue with pleasurable resistance.
Black eyes gazing into my world of indecision
in inverteded vision.
Releasing all of my fear as it feeds
upon pale flesh that endlessly bleeds.
Lips soaking in the stentch of burning leaves
drowning in its own pleasure is all it preceives.
Inhaling hot,shallow breath
as it stares into my depth.
Sweet deamon, love me as I bleed...
Sweet deamon, devoure me as you feed.

(for my husband and what lays within)




 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-31 05:19 PM


I am sure if he would be happy with that ode, maybe.

a powerful poem,

there is strong passion in your words
groweling contently as it feeds.
Savoring my souls existance
sliding down forked tongue with pleasurable resistance.

blended with very dark images

Black eyes gazing into my world of indecision
in inverteded vision.
Releasing all of my fear as it feeds
upon pale flesh that endlessly bleeds.
Lips soaking in the stentch of burning leaves
drowning in its own pleasure is all it preceives.

powerful poem, interesting read. really enjoyed it.

 ------------------------
"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire



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