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Dark Poetry #1

Heaven to Hell

Carly Maas
Junior Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 23
Garden City, MI, USA

0 posted 2000-05-28 06:54 PM

I don't have a name for this poem, it's the first one that I wrote. I wrote this about a year ago, but if you have any suggestions, please let me know. ~Thanx

In space the stars illuminate
and our world looks gray,
from the heavens above to hell below
the stars glow, above so bright,
the glow all the night.

All through the night I sing this song,
I sing it to the stars above,
for the are the only ones who will hear,
the sweet ringing in their ears.

The ringing that will shine so bright,
up to the heavens to this night.
For smiles will not hide the deepness that I see inside.

The deepness that I know is there,
somewhere in the misty air.

The misty air the dims the nights,
so we cannot see the stars shine bright.

The stars will shine bright all through the night.
Whether they are visible or not,
the heavens will make them shine so bright,
that we can see them all through the day,
and all through the night.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-05-28 09:29 PM

Carly,
WELCOME!!!! This is a beautiful poem that really spoke to me, I enjoyed it so..

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-05-29 03:36 AM

Yes my friend the stars will shine even if we don't look, or can't see them.
and hell will burn just as hot.

A very good poem here kid.

Joel..

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeffyf
Junior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 49
Muncie, IN

3 posted 2000-05-31 07:32 PM

All through the night I sing this song,
I sing it to the stars above,
for the are the only ones who will hear,
the sweet ringing in their ears.
Wonderful... keep singing your song, and people will hear, especially if the song is as beautiful as your poetry. Keep it up.
Jeff

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