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Dark Poetry #1

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-12 10:36 PM

Abusing the decrepit apathy
Hiding in the cloak of numbness
Living in an abysmal realm
Of nothingness
Forgotten by the real world
I stand alone in darkness
Blindly groping for a light switch
Insanely laughing al the while
Tears on my cheeks
I click my heels
"There's no place like home."
But I don't have a home

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-10-12 11:51 PM

Hiding in the cloak of numbness!!
Sys, this one shook me up !!
I like the click my heels analogy !!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-13 07:24 AM

Paints a chilling reality!Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-10-14 06:26 PM

Awesome piece, Sys. Very intense. Speaks volumes...I think maybe "Home" would work for a title.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.

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